I know this might be rather overtly melodramatic nevertheless how is this poem?

This is for a competition, and I need some feedback:

Stol'n Beauty:

T'was once ebullient, jovial, sporting wild green

Full of life known for her matchless beauty,

Yet to whom she entrusted that entity

decimated and enshrouded that boisterous glee

Anguish lashes out in tortured screams, whilst tears streak her barren skin

Despondent, faint whispers of pleas

A mirage, a false sense of hope.

End

Well it is about the earth and how it is wasting away.

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ebul路lient

Pronunciation: \-y蓹nt\

Function: adjective

Etymology: Latin ebullient-, ebulliens, present participle of ebullire to bubble out, from e- + bullire to bubble, boil 鈥?more at boil

Date: 1599

1 : boiling, agitated

2 : characterized by ebullience : having or showing liveliness and enthusiasm %26lt;ebullient performers%26gt;

鈥?ebul路lient路ly adverb

I know this might be rather overtly melodramatic nevertheless how is this poem?free antivirus

I like the poem very much. As for "decimated," it really means "diminished by one-tenth." I think you need "destroyed." This word has really been misused lately.
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